Pretty clear, but I'm not sure what you are disagreeing about.
You seem to have reached a fairly similar conclusion as my (deliberately over-simplified) version.
It's a minor point, but I disagree with "shift early". You shouldn't shift early while accelerating, only while cruising.
More over, I can't tell how you are reading the chart to determine "optimal" shift point. Why would you want to shift "just past" max torque? Why not exactly at, or have max torque occur precisely in the center of the RPM range of each gear or land on max torque after shifting?
You're right, my wording could have been more clear. As you state, shifting so that max torque is in the center of the RPM range for each gear is the best you can do, while accelerating. That's what I meant by "just after". That way, your average throughout the acceleration is centered around optimal.
Clearly in your example it would be optimal to cruise exactly at 1750rpms, but how do you determine how that affects acceleration, which is necessarily not any single RPM?
It's not optimal to cruise at 1750, unless you need 50HP when you cruise! If you only need 20hp for the cruising load (aero drag, rolling resistance, slope, and accessories), the most optimal RPM is 1200. It has the lowest fuel consumption on the 20hp line. BSFC * power = fuel consumption.
It all boils down to two rules, which are very similar to yours:
1. When accelerating, give it about 80% throttle and keep the RPMs centered around the torque peak
2. When cruising, use the highest gear and lowest throttle position possible
Small differences, but I guess I have too much time on my commute to think about it :)