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Need readers for a book about Fast Financial Freedom on a low wage

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Cossack:
I have written a book which is similar to Mustachian concepts except some things like retiring with 5 young kids. If I had known how much time and effort it would take over the last 4 years I am not sure I would ever have started. But anyway after some serious editing and re-editing it is finally ready for people to read.

A couple of things:
1. Can you let me know what you think of the title and subtitle?: The Finance Liberation: The Six Steps to Financial Freedom Revealed
(I have the domain name financeliberation.com, hoping to have it as a brand name. What about Personal Finance Liberation?)

2. I’m looking for some beta readers who will give me their honest feedback about the book. In return, I will give you a copy of the book with a page added to acknowledge your help.

Here is the Blurb:
Why do you want to retire when you are old when you can retire years or even decades earlier? This book reveals the “finance liberation” model, a secret six step process that sets you up for financial freedom in a short amount of time.

This step by step guide to financial freedom teaches:

– How David and family managed on one low wage to become financially free in a few short years
– How to travel around the world and still gain wealth
– How to achieve your personal dreams as well as your financial ones
– The one key to success in every area of your life

If you are interested to be a beta reader or if you have comments about the title, please let me know below

Bikesy:
I'll read it and give some feedback.  I wrote down some thoughts on personal finance a couple years ago and it turned into 100 pages or so.  Still haven't done anything with it.  At first glance, the words "secret" and "revealed" sound gimmicky, just my thought.  Interested to read and hear others feedback!

Cossack:
Thanks Bikesy. I just sent you a PM

slappy:
Sounds interesting! I agree about the gimicky language. I can read it over if you want.

NextTime:
I'm game to read it and give you feedback. 

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