Took a quick look. The writing quality looks good although I can’t comment on the actual content itself. You probably already know this based on your post but you need to have some visual appeal. A few pictures, some colored pie charts or graphs maybe? As someone with a passing interest in real estate investing at some point some pics of your builindgs, before/after remodels would put you in a better position to get some follow up views from at least my eyeballs.