That's an improvement,
@Kcinegnet! I especially like the summary line "Vehicle purchasing concierge for less than your vehicle's car payment" at the top of the website's initial page.
Details (one person's opinion only):
1. In the parts that scroll across the pictures, the fine print is still hard to read. Any chance of having those words bring their own flat background with them as they scroll across the picture?
2. Still can't tell how you set the price exactly. Do I as a customer have to negotiate this with you?
3. If you're going to have one of those "my contact information" boxes (I hate those), why not have it specify the make, model and year range I'd like?
4. If you're offering your phone number, could you put in email?
5. Who do I pay? Do you I pay you, or the car seller?
6. Are you a person or a group? Current text says "As a private buyer, we..." If person, personalize it; if group, clarify.
7. Still no examples or success stories.
8. Your model appears to assume the buyer will finance. If I'm a cash buyer, is your fee zero?
8. Alternate draft of into text to replace "It's frustrating to spend all day...", based on my guesses about what you mean:
"When you're ready to buy a safe reliable used car, I will eliminate stressful visits with car salesmen by finding the best deal for you, and having it delivered to your home. I will scour private sale listings across the country for the make, model and year you specify and show you the best listings. When you select your favorites, I will negotiate with the seller, ensure that the car is inspected in detail, and that it passes rigorous quality standards, then arrange financing for you. After inspection and delivery, the price will be less than the typical dealer price on kbb.com for the same make, model, year and condition. My fee? Less than your car payment. I've saved thousands of dollars every time I've bought my own vehicle, and am ready to do the same for you."
To be fair, I don't see how you're going to buy a car in another state, drive it to someone's house, and make a profit charging "less than your car payment." So I assumed that in addition to your fee, inspection and delivery are charged separately. Guesses on my part! Obviously my draft will need some further revision. Just offering food for thought.